help me write the most cliched pop/rock song ever

[bambooneedle]

...one line at a time. Feel free to break into the chorus, middle eight, new verses, etc when it feels right.

Ok, here goes...


I was a-walking down the street

[verbal gymnastics]

On a warm summer's day

[migdd]

Hoping for the chance to meet

[mood swung]

bitches







j/k


your smiling face...

[Emotional Toothpaste]

yeah baby, your smiling face is all that I need

[verbal gymnastics]

Only you can make me feel this way

[bambooneedle]

Awriiight... let's keep it going. Don't worry if you think it's crap, there'll be a chance to tidy it all up down the track.


new verse -

I didn't mean to cheat on you last saturday night

[pophead2k]

But that girl was out of sight

[bambooneedle]

to a drunk fool out of his mind



Actually, this doesn't have to be a new verse just a new bit, i just hope the lines keep flowing, it can change in numerous ways and can be restructured later.

[migdd]

She said : "Please, sir, don't be so kind"

[mood swung]

hurt me, baby, I don't mind...


(oooh oooh oooh)

[migdd]

Two verses nailed! Time for the chorus:

You tore me up, you cut me down

[Gillibeanz]

You blackened my name all over town

[Otis Westinghouse]

How COULD you treat me this way?

[mood swung]

The price of your love is too much to pay...

[bambooneedle]

oooh, but it's... the best thing around ( , that must be what the song is called)

[verbal gymnastics]

Hey man

[migdd]

Take it to the bridge. . .